Friday Flash No. 24 – Worth the Wait: The lovely Ms. F. Lenora has allowed me to provide a micro/flash prompt challenge this week at Friday Flash. As this kind of short fiction falls squarely in my wheelhouse, I’ve contributed a few short-form erotic stories on the theme. Enjoy! ~Beatrix_B
The title of the painting is His Favorite Girl by Scottish painter, Jack Vettriano. There was something very overt, yet mysterious about this image that lent itself well as an erotic prompt for a micro/flash fiction writing challenge.
Considering all who’ve taken up the gauntlet, I’m happy to see that others agreed.
Birthday Surprise
She posed seductively for my husband, half-dressed and wet from my fingers. He’d hadn’t suspected that, nor any of the surprises that awaited him. I hadn’t revealed that my appetite for hot snatch was just as strong as my craving for hard cock. I knew he’d like my present, even though it was my birthday. ■ (55 words)
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One Tough Customer
Anger radiated off me in billows like that from his cigarette. He knew smoking was the only act prohibited in my cathouse—my girls breathed heavy for a living. If he weren’t the police chief and the only man who could top me, I’d put it out on the same tongue I’d orgasm upon afterward. ■ (55 words)
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Goad Digger
“You needed a comparison…so look, goddammit!” Her tone was curt, but her erect nipples showed through black lace. He’d savor those hard pebbles of flesh in his mouth if all went as planned.
“Her body is better.” She recoiled as if slapped.
“Well, she can’t fuck as well as I can!”
“Really? Prove it!” ■ (55 words)
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Juris-DICK-tion
There was no doubt that her client was guilty. Still, she’d only one card left to play when she visited the judge’s chambers late that night. As she stood before him in bra and panties, she expected to go over every inch of his penal code orally, until he came to the right conclusion. ■ (55 words)
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2018 © Beatrix_B | @ThePinkSeam
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These are brilliant and the snap shots work so well. I really struggle to use fewer words 😊
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Thank you! I’m glad you like them. I struggle to use more words…even when I’m trying to on purpose. Haha!
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Together we might reach the perfect word count 😊
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You just might be onto something! Haha!
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These are so good. I think ‘One Tough Customer’ was my absolute favourite though. I am in awe of people who can do so much with so few words x
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Thank you, Floss! I’m glad you enjoyed them.
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I like Juris-DICK-tion best – sexy and humorous and naughty!
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Thanks for reading, May. There’s a little something for everyone. Haha!
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I love how much pure lust you can fit in so few words. Thank you.
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Thank you! Now…if only I could get comfortable doing that over 1K words. Haha!
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These are FANTASTIC! So creative, I managed one set of 55 words today!
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Thank you, K! I’ll swing over and check yours out!
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These are brilliant. I think Tough Customer is my favourite though, you have captured the power play between them perfectly
Mollyx
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Ha! Thanks, Molly! I liked/chose this image as a prompt for that reason. The power and confidence of both characters is evident, but which one is ‘top’? The possibilities were endless.
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Fucking hell, B!!! Four stories… show off! Birthday Surprise was aces.
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Yes, I did go a bit above and beyond, didn’t I? Haha! But, I rarely have an audience for my tiny tales…I had to take advantage of it!
I’m glad you enjoyed them. (It’s cool to see who prefers which.)
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Tough customer takes it for me. I love what you communicated in that story. She sounds strong
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Thanks for reading! That seems to be the favorite among female readers. Haha! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
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[…] Friday Flash ■ His Favorite Girl […]
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I bow down to the Mistress! All of them are awesome in their own way. Btw, I really do love this painting. 😉
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Thanks, Ria! I liked several works by this artist. He has quite a catalogue of erotic art. You should Google him!
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I love these!!
All of them are very hot! 😀
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Glad you enjoyed them. I should write multiples more often. But, as you’d expect, it’s not always easy.
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