50-Word Stories: ‘Heated Reaction’

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Heated Reaction*

Jasper wanted to abscond from his wife’s irate glare. Her failed fellatio attempt—and excessive swelling—had ruined her regal affair. Everyone sighed in relief when he returned with the epinephrine injection to counteract the myriad of spices he’d rubbed on his dick. He’d forgotten she was allergic to cayenne.

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*Italics = words from two previous 3-word prompts (irate, fellatio, cayennerelief, returned, regal)

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50-Word Stories: ‘No Apologies’

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No Apologies

She refused to apologize again for demonstrating a pillory in a college level history course. She was a teacher first and foremost. That the Dean would end up pilloried in the quad and left in a state of undress that was too indecent to make the local news was incidental.

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50-Word Stories: ‘The Head Guard’

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The Head Guard

The guard returned, unable to find the blackheart who’d made an attempt on his queen’s life. Resigned to a quick death, he prostrated himself before her regal throne. To his relief, her royal edit wasn’t to take his head, but to make him give it…to help calm her nerves.

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Writing as a Smut Marathoner – Round 3

Round 3 of the 2020 Smut Marathon has now closed. Below you’ll find a few details and insights about that round’s assignment as well as dates for the next round.

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The Smut Marathon has moved onward with Round 4. So, it is now safe to share a bit about the third writing assignment as well as some background into the entry I submitted.

Read on to see what I wrote and how I fared for Round 3…or click the link(s) below to read my entries for past rounds.

►► Previous entries: Round 1 | Round 2 | Round 3


Round 3 Assignment – Watched Masturbation

For Round 3, writers were asked to depict a character masturbating while being watched and write about what the voyeur sees…all within the word count of 225 to 250 words.

My entry for this assignment was listed as #22 on the during the voting process and is shown below:

22) My Wish, Your Command

“We’re live in 60 seconds. Do you want the fucking job or not?” Genie’s tone is harsh, impatient. My cock hardens instantly, and she notices. “So, you’re one of those.” She smirks, then scowls. “Go get in position!”

I hurry, my arousal surging as I find my mark. My downward view is obscured by the raging hard-on jutting from my pelvis. However, on the widescreen before me, I watch pre-cum pool at the tip.

“Alright, fuckboy! Start jerking in…five…four…three…” My hand grabs my erection and begins pumping.

Genie’s red-lacquered nails type furiously, confirming the live broadcast. Lewd comments flood the widescreen, but I search only for those by KinkGenie23:

>That dick’s so fucking hard.

>Holy shit…it’s already leaking!

My grip tightens. Pre-cum drips while I imagine crimson-tipped fingers stroking me hard. A drawn-out moan escapes my bared teeth.

>I’m getting so wet watching you!

Viscous sounds draw my attention back to Genie, who is frenziedly fingering her pussy while watching me on her monitor. Everything fades as I focus on her glistening fingers slapping against her slippery sex as she watches my darkening glans play peek-a-boo on her monitor. My lower abdomen tenses with a telltale ache of urgency as she screams her release and grinds upon her palm, sending me over the edge too.

Afterwards, I’m amazed by my luck. Not many broke college students think to answer a sex ad and get paid to have their kinkiest wish granted by a Genie.


(Word count = 249) 

My Thought Process

First off, I noticed the wording of this assignment was more open-ended compared to previous assignments. The exact wording of the assignment read:

Your character is masturbating and someone is watching them.
Write about what the voyeur sees.

I assume the vague wording was done on purpose, to allow for more creativity in how one approached the writing task. However, it meant there was a lot more to consider in terms of the storyline I’d go with as well as the perspective from which I’d best write my story—did I want to write from the vantage of the one SM-Calendar_Mar2020amasturbating (while describing what the voyeur is seeing) or from the vantage of the voyeur watching someone masturbate. The more I thought about it, the more I complicated things, I think. But, I really wanted to create something different and unexpected.

I ended up deciding to do a bit of both options, thinking it would be more interesting to write a scenario where both parties were each exhibitionist and voyeur. So, I went with a story from the perspective of a broke college student who accepts a gig requiring him to masturbate on a live stream.

I began writing the day I received the new assignment and had a draft ready for edit a few hours later. However, as the first story idea I had was a bit ‘iffy’ in regards to the rules–specifically, it didn’t clearly depict the masturbatory act from a voyeur’s vantage, I decided to take a second stab at it, which resulted in the entry I submitted (above).

I thought it would be a cool idea to have my main character narrate the details of his own masturbatory act, but also see his actions projected on the widescreen before him. Yet, in the event that wasn’t quite what the rules entailed, I made sure to include the texted comments of his voyeur, as well.

Still, just to be sure I covered my bases in ‘describing what the voyeur sees’, I depicted my main character’s description of what he saw when as his voyeur began to masturbate as well. However, this ‘turnabout’ ended up not appealing to many of the readers.

‘Not so Mixed’ Reviews this Time

This round, I only scored 2 points overall—earning 1 points from the public vote and 1 point from the jury. Unfortunately, my story’s poor reception resulted in my dropping down from 18 to 23 in the overall standings.

A few of the comments my entry received were:

“This was not sexy in my opinion. The language used was not sensual and the inclusion of the voyeur masturbating too ruined it for me.”

“Best line: “My lower abdomen tenses with a telltale ache of urgency…”
I like a twist ending, but this one seemed a little contrived, as though the story started with an ending. The rest of the story seems equally contrived—I didn’t understand what the job was—and while the descriptions are competently written it’s just not my kink. That means the author would have had to work harder to connect me to the characters, and I didn’t connect at all. “

“(7, 16, 17, 22, 41) These stories had promise but their writers would have benefitted from a slightly higher wordcount. “

Then, there was one blessed soul who left a positive comment:

“22- I really liked this one! It was fun and had a couple layers of voyeurism. I love how you brought it all together at the end, too!”

Considering many didn’t mention my story in their list of favorites or contenders, I think  it’s safe to say that my story missed the mark with many of the readers this round—an unlucky result…as I actually had lot of fun writing it.

General Overview of the Field

There was a lot of strong writing this round. Again, I think everyone got the gist of the assignment and wrote a solid tale depicting masturbation and voyeurism to some extent. There seemed to be several stories that involved dual masturbation/voyeurism, with which I obviously didn’t have a problem (Since I did the same.) I also liked that there were more entries that explored either first-person or third-person present tense.

Still, this wasn’t a very easy writing task to take on, so kudos to all the writers who stuck it out and managed to produce their version of the assignment.

My votes for this round were as follows: 23, 26, 33, and 9.

Concluding the Third Round

What can I say… Sometimes, I win some. Sometimes, I lose some. But, I always live to write another day…and for April, I also live to write for two additional month-long writing challenges and a 4K erotic Sci-Fi manuscript to be completed by May 1. I don’t have time to dwell on a story I wrote weeks ago.

So, on to the next assignment.

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Round 4 writing ends APRIL 22 and voting begins on APRIL 26. ◄◄

— All writing and fiction © 2020 Beatrix_B | The Pink Seam —


Stay tuned for Round 4 voting…coming soon!

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50-Word Stories: ‘Collegiate Conjecture’

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Collegiate Conjecture

The professor of post-modernism had a reputation on campus as being incredibly fuckable. Still, after several failed seduction attempts, she was disconsolate to discover her presupposition about the horny student body was false. Most weren’t eager to get in her panties—they just wanted access to steal her expensive lingerie.

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Micro-Fiction: ‘Grind & Punishment’

This 100-word micro story was inspired by a Wordle writing prompt, as coined by its creator, Brenda Warren. Here’s my smutty take on a recent 12-word prompt. 


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Prompt source: Wordle #445

Grind and Punishment

Yesterday, I was consumed by a heat that drove me to grind my sex upon my pillow until tendrils of hair clung wet to my head. I chose to savor the pleasure then, as I do now, under my lover’s lustful gaze.

Do not ask the chain of events that led to this fleshly jail of licentiousness, for I am a sly prisoner—a convict for whom punishment is just a wee threat that holds no sway. For I’m courageous enough to submit to my fate…never content to be a mere storyteller when the crime is that of passion. ■

(100 words)

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2020 © Beatrix_B | @ThePinkSeam


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50-Word Stories: ‘Worth Gold’

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Worth Gold

Helpless, Mercy revealed her naked sex beneath her skirt, hoping to assuage his outrage. He’d wanted premium toilet paper in exchange for the vaccine, not rolls of money. She’d be contrite about fucking him later—after inoculation.

It was a new era of currency, but pussy was still worth gold.

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Writing as a Smut Marathoner – Round 2

Round 2 of the 2020 Smut Marathon has now closed. Below you’ll find a few details and insights about that round’s assignment as well as dates for the next round.

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The Smut Marathon has moved onward with Round 3. So, it is now safe to share a bit about the second writing assignment as well as some background into the entry I submitted.

Read on to see what I wrote and how I fared for Round 2…or click the link(s) below to read my entries for past rounds.

►► Previous entries: Round 1 | Round 2 | Round 3


Round 2 Assignment – Borrowing a Sentence

For the second round of the Smut Marathon, writers were asked to draft an erotic story comprised of 100 to 125 words, but which also included one sentence from the previous round—an entry written by another Smut Marathoner.

My entry for this round was listed as #39 during voting and is shown below:

39) Predator and Prey
Despite your firm grasp around my throat, I shake as your rough thrusts impale me. I’m sure you mistake my growing tremors for resistance—predators often do. However, my endless appetite for male flesh isn’t characteristic of prey.

Your pre-cum coats my tongue from moments before, giving me a contact high that intensifies the twitching in earnest. You grunt as my pussy tightens, convulsing around yet another erection in faded denim behind a seedy, backwoods bar.

Avoiding your gaze, I feel your breath graze my lips with an unspoken, hunted hunger* that ignites my own. When you come, I reveal gleaming eyes and an unhinged jaw before pouncing with such voracity that your hindbrain doesn’t process the threat…only that certain death has come.

*Blue text = Borrowed sentence from Johnny Jackhammer’s (36) Discreet Dancing

My Thought Process

The way I approached this assignment was to randomly pick out 5 or 6 sentences from Round 1 that were fairly generic, but that also didn’t show overuse of alliteration (considering I preferred not to use those that resembled tongue-twisters).

Of the few sentences I singled out, I narrowed down the choices to those that I could add to or manipulate without changing the original sentence. The sentence written by Johnny Jackhammer’s (36) ‘Discreet Dancing’, lent itself well for that purpose. Then I set about thinking how I could change the ‘tone’ of the sentence.SM-Calendar_Mar2020a

I opted to go with a darker, horror-like form of eroticism for my entry this round for a few reasons. First, I was inspired by the ‘hunted hunger’ implicit in the borrowed sentence I chose. Second, I was counting on the fact that there wouldn’t be a lot of writers who would elect to pen lines that fit within the fantasy/horror genre. So, I’d have a better chance of having a memorable story that would stand out amidst the other 86 entries. Finally, in choosing the sentence I did, I could take advantage of the 1st-person/2nd-person POV, which lent itself well to the kind of visceral story I wanted to write.

In the end, I settled on the story idea that gave the impression that the main character was the ‘prey’ in an aggressive sexual interaction with a predator. Then gradually revealed that it was she who was, in fact the predator in the scenario. I added a few words onto the end of the borrowed sentence to serve as a foil to the ‘hunted/hungry’ feelings my main character would also feel as she transformed from presumed prey to predator.

Getting Mixed Reviews…Again

This round, I managed to score 6 more points overall—earning 5 points from the public vote and 1 point from the jury. I was happy to see my entry got 9 actual votes from the public this time, which improved my overall ranking and moved me up from the 21st position to 18th in the overall standings.

Still, I think it’s safe to say that there were those who were not fans of my combining horror within my erotic tale. A few readers who didn’t enjoy the horror direction my entry took said:

“For me, there’s a bit too roughness and it almost feels like horror, especially with the ending, which is great, but didn’t suit my taste for this round.”

” I find it hard to be turned on by fantasies that involve blood and death!”

“Yikes!”

However, there were also those who were more favorable of my decisions to mix things up a bit. Here are a few positive comments my entry received:

“Very interesting! I love how you twisted this sentence into a horror micro story!”

“This is a full story, well written from beginning to end.”

“…I get the distinct sense of something supernatural at play here. And I like the idea of the prey being the predator. I’m iffy on the 2nd person narrator…it does create a more active and feeling of audience involvement.”

As is always the case, voting really boiled down to each individual reader’s taste in erotica. Still, I had a lot more fun writing a story that went against the grain than with it. So, no regrets.

General Overview of the Field

Overall, I thought most entries effectively integrated their chosen borrowed sentences into their erotic micro stories. However, there were a lot of entries that, in my opinion, didn’t really create complete stories. Instead, many wrote erotic scenes that didn’t include a beginning, middle, and an end. Still, in most cases, the writing was very erotic otherwise.

A few things I did note, stories that used some of the more popular sentences from Round 1 ended up sounding very similar. As a result, some of those stories didn’t stand apart enough amidst the other entries, and therefore didn’t make my short-list of favorites.

Another commonality I found was that many of the entries that used the borrowed sentence as the first line of their story often failed to integrate the sentence fully.  So, in most cases, those entries didn’t use their choices to their best advantage…with a few exceptions. Still, it was a complex writing assignment and most were success in writing very sexy lines, even if they weren’t complete stories.

My favorites (and my votes, in bold) were as follows this round: 79, 45, 8, 69, 16 80, 16, 70, 62, 18, 21, 26, 2, 49, 32, 6

Concluding the Second Round

Mixing horror and eroticism might have been a hard sell for this crowd. Still, I’m very happy with the entry I wrote and feel positive about my place in the final standings after Round 2.

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Round 3 writing ends MARCH 25 and voting begins on MARCH 29. ◄◄

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Micro-Fiction: ‘Doting Discipline’

This 100-word micro story was inspired by a Wordle writing prompt, as coined by its creator, Brenda Warren. Here’s my smutty take on a recent 12-word prompt. 


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Prompt source: Wordle #446

Doting Discipline

Allison counted her blessings that Sir decided she’d had enough, despite enjoying the way each stinging smack could make her sing his praises.

She didn’t panic when he’d tell her to kneel on the floor and assume the position. She knew what to expect. He’d rip off her panties, lift her hips the way he liked, then lay into her with the resolve of a flu virus ravaging an nursing home.

Seeing things from his point of view, it had to be a turn-on to be a 40-year-old, spanking the smooth ass of a partner twenty years his junior. ■

(100 words)

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2020 © Beatrix_B | @ThePinkSeam


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50-Word Stories: ‘Born Again’

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Born Again

Spurned by the town’s busty schoolmarm, Preacher headed west to outrun his humiliation, thus beginning his peccant decline. To exercise his demons—and penchant for big breasts—he titty-fucked every buxom harlot he could afford along the stagecoach route to Wyoming until he arrived at his final destination, born again.

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